Kent - Week 30 - White on White
KAS Week 30 White on White-3
KASWeekWhite52 Week ChallengeAssignment 4CPC CloseUp ClassWeek 30 White on White
Kent Schmidt
on July 14, 2014Debbie and Ricky, thank you for your comments. I agree the line is distracting. I was so focused on getting the flower to sit up in this position and showing the curve and shadow that I wasn't paying enough attention to the rest of the composition. I had to crop out the window sill at the top--wish I would have had a little more background at the top.
Ricky Tims
on July 8, 2014Kent - my fav of the three! Because the flower, shape, shadows are all so clean, the horizontal scratch distracts me a bit. It's a minor comment, but thought I'd put my two cents in about it.
Debbie Sinclair
on July 7, 2014I really like how this almost fills the frame and the curve of the stem - the flower almost looks like paper - great composition Kent!