I just continue to appreciate your thoughts and ideas. The dramatic selective focus works - and just as Kent said, the horizontal line (and position) near the top is very helpful. I do agree, maybe cloning a bit of "window?" to the right, removing the dark upper corner, would be something I would do in post. LOVE LOVE LOVE.
The glass is watching me! I like this composition -- the balance, the shallow depth of field and clear focal point, and the position of the horizontal line in the background. One suggestion: cropping or a different camera angle to eliminate the dark area (window frame?) in the upper right corner.